Note: For this challenge, we were asked to write a Double
Etheree with a Nature theme.I n this case the shape of the form should
be a perfect arrow OR diamond shape; this is an aesthetic requirement.
It wasn't perfect, but since this is out of my realm, I did okay I
guess. Not the perfect form, but oh well, Oh, and just for the record,
each line has a specific syllable count: 1 - 1, 2 - 2, etc.
Seared
sun scalds
deprived fields
once waxing corn,
the oppressive heat
too much for fruit to bear
clear Heavens defy drizzle,
plentiful crops dead, providing
proof that global warming does exist
the skies azure: no rain in the forecast
the sweltering summer the hottest yet.
We accept no blame for corruption
despite the warnings provided,
greedy politicians paid
deflecting attention,
vexed generations
now bedeviled,
inheriting
a bleak
earth.
This form really works, Michael. The last line delivers an emotional punch. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThank Jeanette for reading. Glad you liked it!
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